Sally:
She completed a fantastic unit plan on writing persuasive letters for second grade. I found this lesson to be very helpful to me because this is also the topic that I chose so it was helpful to see what a second grader might be learning on a topic compared to what they are learning with my unit plan. I really liked her paper pass group work activity that used the bubble map she created as well as the peer review checklist. Even though it said ‘persuasive’ on that particular worksheet, I would create my own checklist that is more specific for fourth grade for each writing area that covers what my classroom learns and use it consistently. I thought it was great!
Sarah:
Sarah’s lesson on personal narrative for second grade gave me a lot of insight on different avenues to teach this area of writing. I love how you went through steps so thoroughly such as learning sensory and transition words before completing their own narrative. Umbrella writing sounds very interesting. I have heard of people using this strategy but I appreciate fully knowing what it consists of to use in the future. I would use umbrella writing to allow students to both brainstorm and revise on all forms of writing. This way students know that they are using all of the components and that their paragraph flows together.